June 06, 2014

Goddess Fish Promotions: For the Bite of It by Viki Lyn and Vina Grey (REVIEW)

For the Bite of It
by Viki Lyn and Vina Grey



VINCENT KAMATEROS is an exiled vampire making a routine living as the owner of a cupcake bakery in Arizona. Until a car with a dead driver crashes through the wall of his shop, bringing after it, All-American, closeted cop, JOHN REEDER. Smitten the instant he sees John, but bound to silence by the Vampire High Council, he can never reveal his true self to John. Detective John Reeder can’t control his attraction to the sexy Italian baker. But as addictive as the sex is, John can’t overcome his fear of rejection for being gay, and open his heart to a man with so many secrets.



Copyright © Viki Lyn and Vina Grey, 2014

Chapter One

The front half of a silver sedan decorated his bakery, its nose nudging the counter, glass shards peppering the floor like confetti. Except Vincent Kamateros wasn’t celebrating. Didn’t have much to celebrate, really.

He stepped around the vehicle, and glass crunched under his clogs despite his walking-on-hot-coals strut. The car had nose-dived into his store about an hour ago. His landlord, Mr. Sala, slumped between his seat and air bag. Dead. If it wasn't so serious, the situation could have been a scene from a cure-for-insomnia B grade movie you watched at three in the morning.

Sir, the crime scene is off limits.”

He took out his irritation on the unfortunate crime scene tech, pinning the man with his gaze. “The entire bakery cannot be a crime scene, surely?” Fine for them to tape off the scene, but he wasn’t leaving his shop.

I’m sorry, sir. I'll get my supervisor.” The young fellow scampered away.

Ah good, so he could still intimidate with a look. All was perhaps not lost. Except his life as he had known it and his powers. Madre de dios. Enough with this maudlin mood.

Vince pressed his thumbs to his eyes. These humans made him jumpy. Eight weeks without warm, flowing blood had left him as nervous as a caged bird with a cat tapping on the bars.

Sir, you need to step back.” One of Tempe’s best in a navy uniform held out his hand to stop Vince. The place crawled with them.

He intimidated the human with a forceful glare but a voice from behind distracted him.

Excuse me, are you the owner?”

The deep tone made him think of fire lit nights and warm sheepskin rugs and bodies twined in lust. Surely, lack of blood would not lead to such a reaction to a male voice. He turned.

Ah, yes. Fire, rug, desire­ – emotions evoked by a voice and the physical appearance of the man before him. He took in the man from his broad shoulders to his polished loafers. He couldn’t help it. Dark sleek pants hugged muscled thighs. A blue polo shirt outlined shoulders embodying the clich├ęd mile. That cock-sure stance, feet apart, slightly on his toes. This man would tempt a saint buried twenty-feet under.

He pursed his lips to hold back a smirk as the man stepped away from Vince’s scrutiny. Though Vince had to give him credit for not backing off the stare-down.

Yes, this is my bakery.” Vince scrutinized the man’s body again. A tingle behind his eyes warned him to curb his lust before his eyes changed color. It had been decades since he'd had such a gut reaction to a man. He blinked and mentally willed away his innate response to such a strong emotion.

I’m Detective Reeder, this is Detective Norman.” The detective indicated a redheaded woman beside him with a flip of his hand. “We need to ask you some questions.”

He blinked at the ID thrust under his nose – J. Reeder. What did the J stand for? Something typifying the boy next store with his clean-cut looks - Jake, John, Joe?

Sure. Er…where do you want me?” His brain couldn’t swing a more polished response.

Say here, right now, on your knees.

He really had to do something about his abstinence. Maybe, in a less blood-deprived state, this unexpected All-American male wouldn’t tempt him.

Let’s get out of this mess.” Detective Reeder pivoted on one heel and walked away. Not for a bag of fresh blood could Vince have stopped his eyes from darting down

again. The front view had set up the back one perfectly – a begging-to-be-held ass.

The detective glanced over his shoulder. “Unless you want to come back to the station.”

Vince shook his head. This man brought back memories of the thrill of the chase, the enticing two-step when attraction first hit.

Outside is fine.” His more lustful thoughts came to a halt when he passed the shattered window. The damage to his shop caused a pang in his heart. Who knew when he’d been talked into buying a cupcake bakery he would become so proprietary? Life sure took the strangest twists and turns.


For the Bite of It by Viki Lynn and Vina Grey is an interesting take on vampires. Vincent Esposito is the vampire, who has been stripped of his powers, and now lives his life as a baker. He meets closeted cop John Reeder during a murder investigation.
Both men are immediately attracted to each other, but both believe nothing good can come out of it. Vincent can't have a relationship with a human, even though he lives in exile. John doesn't want to come out of the closet, and besides, Vincent is a murder suspect in the beginning.
I don't want to give away the plot and its twists, so you'll have to find out for yourself. :)
Viki Lynn and Vina Grey's writing styles meshed very well, and the story was an easy read. I enjoyed finding out about the reason for Vincent's exile, since it showed a noble attitude. There were a few secondary characters that I hope to see more of in the next book, especially Vincent's friend, Angelo.
I wasn't completely enamored with the constant back and forth between Vincent and John, but I liked them together as a couple.
While the murder case is closed at the end of the story, there's still the secret of Vincent being a vampire standing between the two men. John senses that Vincent is hiding something, but he wants Vincent badly and tries not to push him away. I admit I was a bit disappointed with the story end because the big secret remained. However, I note this is the first book in the “Orbus Arcana” series, so I'm hoping John will find out about Vincent's secret in the sequel.

Overall, I'm rating For the Bite of It at 3.5 stars (rounded up to 4 stars) and would recommend it to readers who like vampires, interesting world-building and a slow romance.


AUTHOR Bio and Links:

Viki Lyn:

What inspires me - the reality that romance between lovers is a hope more than a guarantee. My stories are an eclectic mix of contemporary and paranormal, but it is always romance that drives the story to its final happily-ever-after. There's nothing better than reading a good book over an espresso, watching a movie or trying out a new restaurant. I'm the author of several gay romances, including Last Chance, Rainbow Award winner for the Best Gay Paranormal/Horror. Viki’s website is http://www.vikilyn.com/;

Vina Grey:

Vina Grey loves writing about romance. Two people finding each other, the two-step before they get together and the happily ever after, have to be the best story ever. Throw in some paranormal elements and she's in heaven. Vampires and cops, anyone? She loves to jabber away with anyone about books, so drop her a line at vinagrey@gmail.com. Vina’s cyber home is here: http://vinagrey.wordpress.com/



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  1. A very helpful review thank you.


  2. I adore Vampire stories, so this is something I would definitely read. The cover is fantastic too!

    1. Vina and I agree with you - we love the cover. It was designed by Winterheart Design. Book 2 cover is also a beauty. ;) and designed by Winterheart.

  3. Chris, thank you for the review and hosting us today! I know the ending is a little open but book 2 is well on its way to completion and should be available this July. :) Very soon. I will pop back in to answer any questions. Thanks all for commenting.

    1. Viki, thanks for stopping by!

      I'm looking forward to read the second book. :)

  4. Enjoyed reading your review, look forward to reading this book.
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  5. Nice review

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  6. Good Morning. Chris, thank you for hosting us on our blog tour. And for the review. I love all the comments. Have a great weekend! Viki

  7. HI Chris, thanks so much for the review and for hosting us. We found it an interesting process, writing together, but we've survived (grin) and are still friends and have 2 more books planned in the series. Book 2 will have revelations and angst and lots of loving! Hope you enjoy that one as well.
    Cheers, Vina

  8. Good excerpt and review. I enjoy mysteries and slow romances.
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  9. please count me in